Looking
back at your preliminary task (the school magazine task), what do you
feel you have learnt in the progression from it to full product?
Looking back now I can see the tremendous amount of difference that has occurred when making my main task of a music magazine to when I did my preliminary task of my school magazine. Before when I made my school magazine I knew very little about the programmes I as using and didn't have a good idea about designing or laying out my work. Now, although my work is far from being perfect or to a professional level, I believe I have made a lot of progress and my work is now at a much higher standard than it was before.
Looking back now I can see the tremendous amount of difference that has occurred when making my main task of a music magazine to when I did my preliminary task of my school magazine. Before when I made my school magazine I knew very little about the programmes I as using and didn't have a good idea about designing or laying out my work. Now, although my work is far from being perfect or to a professional level, I believe I have made a lot of progress and my work is now at a much higher standard than it was before.
A you can see here my front page for my school magazine is very simple, plain and quite empty. There are no extra sections of text that tell you about the inside of the magazine, whereas my music magazine includes a lot of extra information to let the reader know what is inside this is how I attracted an audience to my music magazine.
Title
One of the main features that I think has made my preliminary task so different to my main task is the title.


My school magazine title is not very bold or eye catching and I wrongly put it on a dark coloured background and it fades in sections slightly and cannot be seen clearly. In my Music magazine I made sure that The title would be able to be seen clearly, being the priority of clear things on the page as the title is the first thing the reader is dawn to and can determine weather it is a success or not. I put it on a black box background so that the monochrome style made it easy for people to read it. Obviously when i was making my school magazine i was not aware of this. The 'Cherry tree lane' Part of the title in my school magazine is very Small in comparison to the page which is a result of bad layout and page planning. If I had made it bolder and bigger like the 'Weekly' part I would not have had this problem. This then shows how I have become more aware of bad design decisions and have used my knowledge to avoid this error occurring in my main task of my music magazine.
Image wise I think I was not that bad to begin with as my photos are clear. However i recall having difficulties with the lighting on the school magazine image as there was a harsh glare on their faces and one model looked considerably brighter in colour to the other. I avoided this in my Music magazine by taking my pictures in the correct environment so that I could be sure to not have this problem again, although I only did this in second photo-shoot for the front page.
Contents page
For my contents page, in my school magazine there are very random and inconsistent choices of colour used and I didn't seem to be aware of anything that was going on in the page. In my music magazine I have chosen my colours, stuck to them and used them in the appropriate ares. As you can see in my school magazine there is a lot of white space and it looks a bit like a poster rather than a contents page. I have learnt from that mistake and in my music magazine I proved how I used up the space that I needed to and filled all of the empty spaces. The writing in my school magazine has no border or control and just looks like it is floating there and in my music magazine I made sure it had a border and looked separated to the images , making full use of my space.
As you can see here I have made huge progress in taking pictures for my contents page. There a really big problems with my school magazine image such as the lighting being way too harsh on the models faces. This happened because I was not in the right environment and had put the flash on my camera. I clearly avoided this problem with my music magazine as I chose to have proper lighting set up so the model was lit well and there was no need for the flash of my camera. This made so much difference and you can see how different these pictures look in quality.


Planning
If there's one thing I have learnt from this experience it is that I must plan ahead more. In both tasks I found myself with limited l=time and deadlines got closer very quickly, even more so when I did my preliminary task. For my school magazine I was very late at taking my pictures therefore i had hardly any time to do the rest that needed to be done. For my music magazine I actually took all of my pictures very early on and that left me slightly more time to do other things.













